Preserving the Environment

Preserving the Environment

Directions: For this part, you are required to write a composition of about 120 words on the topic: Preserving the Environment. You should base your writing on the following outline (given in Chinese). You can write as many paragraphs as you wish, but you should not omit any part of the outline.

1．人类生存与环境有关；

2．目前环境污染日益严重（略述原因）；

3．保护环境是我们的重要任务。

【范文】

Preserving the Environment

Environment means the land, water, and atmosphere we live by①. Environment is the earth, the only planet and home for us human race②. No one will doubt that we can ever survive③ while the land, water and atmosphere are seriously polluted.

However, this is the situation we are facing today. Every day, every hour, and even every minute, the air, forests, soil, oceans and fish water are becoming dirtier and dirtier with increasing speed④ , which is threatening our existence. There are mainly two causes of⑤ the environmental problems: the excessive use of natural resources and massive discharge of⑥ polluted waste in the course of production.

Preserving the environment is of crucial importance⑦ to mankind today. We must take immediate measures to⑧ fight against⑨ pollution. “Conquering the nature⑩ ” should never be our goal. Instead, we should take nature as our closest friend. Preserving the environment is not only preserving our home but the civilization of human community as well11.

【注释】

①live by：靠……过去；以……为生

②human race：人类，相当于people in general

③survive：vi& vt. 大难不死，幸免于难

④… with increasing speed …：介词with引导一个现在分词短语作状语，说明谓语动词行为方式。

⑤excessive use of …：excessive意思是“过度的”；“极端的”，所以这个短语是说“对……过度使用”。

⑥massive discharge of …：大规模地排放……

⑦be of crucial importance：系动词be和介词of连用，表明某事物具有什么性质或属性；crucial意为“决定性的”，“关系重大的”。所以这句话的意思是：保护环境对今天的人类来说是至关重要的。

⑧take immediate measures to：take measures意为“采取措施”，所以这个词组的意思是“采取紧急措施以……”。

⑨fight against：与……作斗争

⑩conquer the nature：征服大自然

11as well：也，同样（是）

【点评】

全篇文章逻辑清晰，语言表达自然流畅。用“However”一词作上段与下段的转折词，过渡自然，结构也显得严谨。